![]() You have a gift and I love that you're using it to entertain us all. And every sentence flows naturally into the next and feels right when you read it. You write the exact right number of filler words in between key words and filler sentences in between key information, and the exact right amount of inaction in between the action. (Maybe you even know a name for it, idk.) But every time someone talks, it's like he or she both says the exact right number of words and conveys the exact right amount of information. I don't really know how to describe it well, but I'm guessing you know what I mean since you're as skilled of a writer as you are. Nothing feels excessive and nothing feels like it's missing anything. It was super fast paced, but only because it was rushed and needed more writing. Everything that anyone said or did just felt like something was missing. During scenes was choppy in between scenes was choppy. ![]() I played this other game that seemed to be trying to do something similar to this one, but it was so bad that it wasn't even worth playing (or worth remembering the name of for that matter.) Everything about it was so choppy. I just wanted to tell you how much I appreciate all the little detail in your game. If you'd like to support the development of the game, please check out my Patreon or Subscribestar pages, where you can contribute to the creation of the game while having an active role, get Exclusive Content, get updates before anyone else, and much more! In the meantime, you can take a look at my other game: Once in a Lifetime, which I already completed! As Eternum, it's totally free for everyone! The game currently has thousands of renders and animations, but it's still in development! This means that there's still a LOT of stuff to come! Many adventures and sexy moments await you! Some say it’s because the game is highly addictive, some say it’s because the market moves millions of dollars daily, some say those in power have been bribed, and others say… there’s something else going on. Nevertheless, looking beyond the surface, there's a darker side to this pretty facade: black markets, torture, rape, illegal content trafficking, unlawful assemblies, data theft… Eternum follows the rules of no man.įor some reason, governments turn a blind eye to this there’s no regulation and no control. Thousands of servers form the network of Eternum: from colorful, magic-filled fantasy worlds to foggy sci-fi cities, no world is beyond reach. ![]() With a neural implant that recreates the five senses, it becomes impossible to distinguish between the game and the real world. However, in Kredon, there’s only one thing everyone talks about: ETERNUM-the virtual, hyper-reality MMORPG game released a few years ago that revolutionized the world of technology. You’re moving with your best friend to the city of Kredon, home to some of the best schools and universities in the country, to continue your studies. I'm Caribdis and I'm creating Eternum, a choice-based visual novel made in Ren'py with tons of romance, mystery, humor, and much more!
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